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Sounds well put together but the sounds that you used were a bit lame. It's got a cool 8-bit sound behind it but the child-like toy keyboard sound really killed it for me.

Delicious.

It's like I'm watching CSI Las Vegas when they do their analyzing montages haha

Norato responds:

xDD

I like it! Very sweet and innocent sounding. Your instrument sounds a tad out of tune but strangely it sorta adds a contrast along side with the sweet tone of it. I can imagine a child on a hillside or along a coastline playing his heart out on a homemade guitar.

RyeGuyHead responds:

Thank you! I used to be a child along the coastline...

And it is slightly out of tune (D-A-D-D semitone), I liked the vibe of it like that

Pretty cool. Besides from the few odd overlapping guitar tracks and the mediocre recording quality I think the song has good potential. I think it deserves another edit or re-recording in my opinion.

Destrayop responds:

Thanks man.
Yeah I threw this together in a rush, I do enjoy it's oddness though.
Might rerecord it sometime in the near future.
Comment's much appreciated! Give my other stuff a listen if you like.

DAMN that was catchy. Could use a little less of the beeping lead though, otherwise it was tasty.

Popnotes responds:

Thank you! I made it in about 5 hours so it isn't really my best work, but I do agree. Thanks for reviewing and if you keep doing so, I can learn from what mistakes I've made to become better.

Man, that was beautiful. Nothing else I can say but that.
Btw I heard a little hiccup at around 0:56. Small error :)

samulis responds:

Yeah, it's a problem between Finale and the EWQL reverb... I need to figure out a fix somehow.

I'm glad you liked it. :)

This is really interesting. I like the contrast between the sweet sounding synth and the dirty wubs but maybe the dubstep parts could have a little more variety especially at 0:56 where it drags on a little bit (possibly mix both the synth and dubstep at the same time?)

Kinda makes me think of robots attacking a peaceful island.

Awesome stuff but FUCK man I had headphones in. I would absolutely love to use this in my own work, being a fan of creepy noises (or things that scare people in general).

Hey, I make stuff but I probably will never put them on here because yea. It's all on my youtubes. No wait I added something. Scratch that. If anyone wants to play with me on steam or xbox, feel free to add me: LasciviousGork (for both)

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