LasciviousGork's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Show Time!]

DAMN

DuttonsaysHi responds:

AHUAHUGH

[Friendships Die Hard]

Pretty good. I think the vocals need to be leveled lower to mix with the music better. Also it sounds like you break your flow a few times too. The backing track sounds amazing though.

"My own friends hated me. Shit." This line makes me crack up for some reason lol.

Karimmet responds:

Lol maybe I will change that line that makes you laugh. So you think the vocals should be a little lower than the music? It would be great if you can tell me where I broke flow. It is hard for me to realize sometimes :)

[Nightly Jam]

I'm jealous of your family

camoshark responds:

What can I say, I got lucky! Thanks for the comment, glad you enjoyed!

[Logic]

Very nice. It's got that good buildup synth that gets you pumped. Something I think could have lyrics to or at the least be applied to a video to give it some added visuals.

ZLEAP responds:

I'm working on an extended version with much more work into it. This one should do you proud. Far too intoxicated to work right now though. Happy new year. This one has to be better than the last.

[Death Slumber (Villain)]

Love the guitar. Happy Festivus.

ZLEAP responds:

Trent Reznor once said something to the effect of if I can't play something on guitar, I'll just have a computer do that for me.

No guitars in this. But as soon as I get some equipment, there will be.

Thanks man.

[Apocymetal]

Sexy

PirateCrab responds:

Yes you are

[Hearts Desire]

Industrial songs always seem to immerse me into another world. This is no exception.

ZLEAP responds:

That's exactly what attracted me to the genre. Like so many others, my introduction to Industrial music was through Nine Inch Nails, Ministry and early Manson. Once I found KMFDM,Skinny Puppy and a ton of other artist I don't feel like typing, it was over. I knew then what I wanted to make as as a musician. At some point, I plan on adding guitars. Loud and chuggin.

[Fuck Face]

Very catchy. I like the melody but the sound itself doesn't sound right with everything else. Reminds me of a toy guitar.

ZLEAP responds:

Agreed. It would be great if I could replace that out of place sound with an actual guitar. I lack equipment to do so. Until then, I should be able to swap out the synth. Its far from done. This is just a loop of where I'm at on it.

[Overjoke]

Well shit, that was good.

spot1techno responds:

Thank you! :D

[FAIA]

Such well constructed mix of feelings. I can get this sense of being so tired of the world that it finally gets to you. The long lasting aggravation and depression is so much that you just want to laugh at the insanity. The energy of the song can represent the last jolt of energy you have before finally giving up, using that jolt to either commit your last selfish satisfactions on yourself or to take one last look at the world and say nothing will get better. Could this be the meaning of the song? I don't know, but that's what I feel from it. And it's always interesting to let your imagination go off on things like these.

ZLEAP responds:

You and Anchorwind pretty much hit the nail on the head, friends. I've recently come out of a depression that nearly caused me to give up music among other things. It almost got on my nerves to even hear my own songs. The depression was as sudden as it was intense.

So I guess this was my creativity writing a suicide note.