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Loved the change in the second half

ZLEAP responds:

So did I. Thats the main reason the lyrics got dropped. I managed to render a primitive copy of it with them still on there but upon listening, anyone could tell it just wasn't working. Maybe I'll upload it. Probably not.

When someone searches for "banana" they're gonna end up discovering this little piece of wonder

ZLEAP responds:

That's the idea! Anyway, thanks for having a listen. Once again, I am the cheese in your sandwich.

(happy face)

It can be better if its fleshed out more. I'm thinking you shouldn't work on this song until you get that perfect idea of how to make it a masterpiece.

ZLEAP responds:

It has died. RIP.

A good artist never believes his work is finished. Another fine song.

ZLEAP responds:

I love you.

I love the joyful melody over the heavy drums and synth. It makes a good contrast and the minor notes complement that, making it blend together nicely.

As a song, it feels as if it needs more of a climax to it. Like maybe a growling guitar or anything to break the repetition.

But as a loop it works well. Could listen to it several times and still enjoy it.

I'm just the kind of guy who likes some progressive-ness once in a while, hence the minus half a star.

ZLEAP responds:

Agreed. This is just a short demo of the song. Hell, I haven't really even began to put work into it. Thanks for the input. I'll keep all of that in mind.

Why aren't you on the cover of rolling stones

ZLEAP responds:

Reason #1 - I'm not a commercially successful artist. I'm quite the opposite.
Reason #2 - Most of my songs lack a lot of things. To name one, lyrics.
Reason #3 - The majority of my work has been done cheaply. Maybe when I'm able to dump money into this project and be able to make it truly great, I'll gain the attention of more people than just here on Newgrounds. As awesome and supportive some of you guys are, at the end of the day, you don't hand me money. One day. Until then, enjoy this free music I make to dump my creativity into something.

Thanks.

This would make a good background song for a madness or thing thing game

ZLEAP responds:

Probably so. I would love for someone to use this in a madness flash.

I'm loving those note bends

ZLEAP responds:

It was hard to decide how much bend was too much. At times, it almost had a "Whacky" sound to it.

Despite your negativity, I still declare this as a great piece. It felt very memorable and can see this being used in a high production movie.

camoshark responds:

Thank you for the kind words, we'll see how well it performs in the competition!

Cheers

Hey, I make stuff but I probably will never put them on here because yea. It's all on my youtubes. No wait I added something. Scratch that. If anyone wants to play with me on steam or xbox, feel free to add me: LasciviousGork (for both)

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